The Wish Collector by Mia SheridanMy rating: 2 of 5 stars
I had such high hopes for this one but unfortunately found it to be completely tedious and lacking in any sort of emotional resonance and/or tension. I even fell asleep while reading it, on 3 separate occasions. In broad daylight. That’s how absolutely bored with it that I was. It just did not work for me, and I couldn’t wait for it to end.
The concept should have been brilliant, but the storytelling didn’t carry it through. So instead, it comes off as long-winded, predictable, and whiney.
Let’s face it, only about 1/3 of this story was necessary. And the rest is just another stereotypical self-hating rich dude who needs some dainty little naive women to love him and change his world. Been there, done that, not even the hint of Beauty and the Beast-ness that this novel has could entice me to enjoy this further.
I think a great starting point to making this book better would have been to edit out 25,000 words worth of excess. Then to go back and give each and every scene movement, emotion, and intentionality. Because it's not the concept that I disliked. It's the execution.
Pages: 504


